tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588509537601105804.post4132864397759556415..comments2024-01-26T08:04:08.517-05:00Comments on The Public Query Slushpile: Query Revision 1 - Kingmaker (formerly A Profusion of Want)Rick Daleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05173516899130463413noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588509537601105804.post-11795211655750256752009-07-27T17:28:19.865-04:002009-07-27T17:28:19.865-04:00Regan,
I do like this version much better than th...Regan,<br /><br />I do like this version much better than the first and even with the first i wanted to read your sample pages right away! Well done!Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06004818838544105847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588509537601105804.post-32601897168900730322009-07-27T12:51:01.546-04:002009-07-27T12:51:01.546-04:00Thanks for the comments :)
Unfortunately, I think...Thanks for the comments :)<br /><br />Unfortunately, I think that for now I've posted all the sample pages I should! Otherwise in my eagerness for crits I'll post my entire novel...Regan Kirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07743064670671084192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588509537601105804.post-56993577120707971512009-07-27T01:06:18.614-04:002009-07-27T01:06:18.614-04:00Ohhh, this is so much better than the last version...Ohhh, this is so much better than the last version. I'm with Amanda. Do we get to see more pages?Suzan Hardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04600258874634909988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588509537601105804.post-13777009264812783412009-07-26T23:16:10.040-04:002009-07-26T23:16:10.040-04:00Can I request sample pages? :D I like it, you give...Can I request sample pages? :D I like it, you give a very nice description of your book that leaves me wanting more. Congrats, you've hooked me!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12294516011395206412noreply@blogger.com